A Parting Poem by Iain Mackay

A Parting



This Thing -
This Feeling -
That she gave to me,
Or I took …
What do I want with it
Now?

She looked at me
As I said it,
Moist eyes filling with
Hurt shock.

(I couldn’t see through the cold rain
As she turned on her heel
And walked from me.
I don’t know if burning tears
Spilled from her eyes
As she click-clacked on the pavement
Out of my life.)

Dark night,
Empty heart,
Watching Broken Heart.
She stops,
Stunned by her loss -
Returning
To plead again.
Stopping at a distance -

As I turned,
And moved
Into the darkness.

Did she cry as she stood there,
Watching me walk
Out of her life
Forever?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 12 July 2008

Iain, you captured the parting very well, reminded me of a moment in the distant past, thank you for that. Bob

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Aine Ní Leidhin 24 October 2007

There's a sadness radiating from the lines of your poetry. Were you writing from personal experience? Remember Madonna's 'everyone must stand alone' but similarily everyone needs human contact based on mutual exchange. Kind regards

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