A Nightmare Poem by Thomas Koron

A Nightmare

Rating: 4.0


Last night I had dreamed,
About all things horrible,
Housed under one roof.

© 2015

Saturday, March 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,horror,isolation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 March 2015

Nice haiku. Perfect form. Five syllables, then seven, then five. There are some on this website who write what they say are haikus that really aren't. Also, to have all of the horrible things house under one roof in the last line meets the classical haiku requirement of having some kind of twist or surprise at the end. Very well written indeed.

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Thomas Koron

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Grand Rapids, Michigan
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