A still tongue keeps a wise head.
A talkative fool tries to turn heads.
A sailor thinks himself a rocket scientist.
everyone deceives me, everyone does their best,
that's why I had been lost in a great mist,
that pushed me away from east to west.
Now, I'm on the summit of a mountain,
ready for getting rid of my lifelong pain.
My heart is near from God and I'm going to pray
for Him, and thank Him for guiding to the right way,
that could save me from a deadly lightning ray,
and guide me to a new life, that's really made my day.
Where there is no pain, no hatress, no fake, no lie,
no one can hurt me again, till the day I die.
The used Idioms and Idiomatic expressions!
A still tongue keeps a wise head = Wise people don't talk much.
Tries to tern heads = Tries to be noticed by everyone all the time.
Rocket scientist = The most intelligent person.
Lifelong = Eternal
Made my day = Made me happy!
My dear young poet friend, your creativity and imagination excel the parallel of most ordinary people of your age. I take my hat off in your honor for your great talented vividly shown in everyone of your poems including this amazing one. God Bless You! We are the children of the Universe and will remain as such in flesh and spirit! Keep giving us and the rest of the World more food for thought with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
this poem is amazing great theres not enough words to describe how good this poem is
This is a very well written poem. It expresses feeling that can be felt even by the reader. Keep up the good work.
My heart is near from God and I'm going to pray/for Him, and thank Him for guiding to the right way. Sincere faith.I like this line. Beautiful.
Ah! That poem show all your talent Poet! ! ! ! Very well written! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Woa! Gorgeous poem and so true; who wants an attention seeker around? =)