A New Day… Poem by Mehreen Tahir

A New Day…

Rating: 5.0


The clouds make way,
for the sun to make a smooth appearance,
as the golden ball emerges,
and envelopes the darkness of night,
moving slowly,
bringing to life,
mere mortals on land,
who wake up with the sun’s first rays,
and the birds,
that sing in Divine praise,
and chirp away the morning song,
the flowers that blossom,
of all colours and shapes,
shining of morning dew,
smelling of beauty and life;
the golden ball smiles down,
at all the songs,
breathes in the fragrances,
follows the motion,
that marks a new day;
that marks life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 04 May 2008

Nice poem, well penned. Ian

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Howard Johnson 07 May 2008

A most beautiful write, filled with rich immagery, Thank you for letting me read, , Mehreen,

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Golden ball lost its way drowned in my coffee mug there is blinding light in every vein sun of your absence never sets hither Wonderful Mehreen- :)

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Andrew Leclair 12 May 2008

the image show in this poem is beautiful...well done

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Lynda Robson 14 May 2008

I think you have described daybreak so well here, I really enjoyed reading it, Best wishes Lynda x

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Muhammad Javed Zeshan 20 November 2013

good one nature abundant reminds the day break/dawn

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Aijaz Asif 17 November 2008

a nice and refreshing write indeed, you defined the beauties of the day break very beautifully here, very well penned...thanks 10

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Fahim Sayed 18 May 2008

Nice and refreshing thoughts....of a new morning......

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Laurence Overmire 17 May 2008

Refreshing and invigorating! Thank you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 May 2008

good imagery and view of sunrise, , , nice write

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