A New Beginning Poem by babitha marina justin

A New Beginning

Rating: 4.0


morning
filters
through
the door
ajar.
you too,
came in
fresh from
a bath
a towel
wrapped
around
your waist.
leaving
the nightmares
of
yesterday
behind you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 20 July 2008

nice one, well handled

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Tharmingam Khangrah 31 January 2008

You have tamed simplicity and clarity. Great going.

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I thoroughly enjoyed this refreshing poem with its quite vivid image.

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Emancipation Planz 15 January 2008

This is refreshingly awashed! !

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