A Mornings Word 10/29/07 Poem by wordsy wright

A Mornings Word 10/29/07



Lost up in a world
that I don't understand
Caught up in a situation
and told to be a man

Saddled with some choices
though none of them my own
Forced to reap the sorrows
that others once had sown

Lured to live in chaos
though it's not of my own make
Left to find just how much
my saddened soul can take

Drown up in the flow of tears
that flood my weary heart
Thrust up in a war of woes
of which I want no part

Haled to bare the burdens
that are brought about to bear
Left to find that those we follow
do not really care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 29 October 2007

Good write, :) But shouldn't it be drowned instead of 'drown'? It sort of breaks the verb pattern in the poem. And did you mean hailed, not 'haled'? Just minor things, don't worry: P

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