A Lovers Moment Poem by Simon Collins

A Lovers Moment

Rating: 5.0


Standing too close to me
In this cool late summer evening
Clusters of tiny flies dance to a silent rhythm
like drunk atomic particles
Your smile lights a fire
Far away in the psychedelic twilight
A chimneys Unblown smoke curls and unwinds
into a soft translucent cushion
You better go, he is inside
I say in my head while noticing your eye colour
Wanting to look deeper
The sun is almost spent and the cooling earth relents
It's warmth
I wonder where he is you say
As the colours darken and pull away from the light
You are gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 08 May 2012

You create the scene, the unsaid feelings that speak loudly throughout this poem. An enjoyable and reflective read.

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Kasia Fedyk 04 May 2012

I love this poem Simon, it's very deep, lyrics flow to the rhythm of your heart. Thank you.

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