A Love Within Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Love Within

Rating: 5.0


A deep love
Within,
Sometimes my words
Come out to breath
To write,
An unimportant poem
To ease my fright
In this more than
Complicated world
For my soul and I,
Cannot live,
Without beauty's passion,
Dreaming, never rationed
World of chasms
Between fantasy and reality,
Shaking off, life's trivialities.

I always want to sail
To imaginary worlds
That although, frail
Ease daily, travail
Protect us from sadness
Like a bluish, veil.

We all hope,
Fondly wish
We find someone to share
This voyage with,
Holding hands,
Listening, to tunes,
Played and sung
By the lonely moon,
Watching the stars
Commune,
On velvet black,
Holding hands.
That precious someone
Who understands,
With whom
Nothing can hurt you
Because they also
Know that love
Is giving, sharing,
Reaching for each other
In a way,
That the unloved
Will never know,
That incredible
Indelible,
Loving glow.

Saturday, August 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 17 August 2019

romantic, heartfelt and ease fully flowing

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Bill Cantrell 17 August 2019

My goodness! ! ! What an absolutely outstanding poem! ! ! Wow! ! ! My dear friend, the thing about passion in poetry is that sometimes we strike pure gold and you did that with this poem, it has everything in it with nothing lacking! ! To my favorites! ! !

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Amigazo 17 August 2019

Holy Moly! Did that feel good to read~ So well expressed and only by ONE who knows this depth~ thanks for letting us know what it is like! ! ! Merci

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2021

Your great love for humanity and poetry shines through in this magnificent well crafted poem. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2021

A wonderful and very heartwarming write embellished with great rhythm and passionate words.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 August 2019

Shared love from within deeply solidifies the harmony between humans....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2019

Deep love grows much faster with positive mind and this is felt in deep breath. An excellent poem is wonderfully penned.

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 August 2019

Such a beautifully write piece..as always Sandra a remarkable work! Your pieces always leave me in a contemplative mood which is probably the best thing a poet could ask for..thank you so much for sharing

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