A Lonely Walk One Night Poem by Ananta Madhavan

A Lonely Walk One Night

Rating: 5.0


Touristic images pursue me in a town,
Perhaps in Culver City, Beverly Hills,
Where highways and cars have shaped
The lives of folks in varied strata.

On a lonely walk at night many shadows
Moved with me along a well-lit street.
A strong shadow, stalking me, suddenly
Lunged forward and overtook me.
Paler shadows were slinking back, but one,
Pitch black in outline boldly slid past me,
Without a word of greeting, but signalling
Full recognition.It was my flitting alter ego.

Daylight deals in shades rather than shadows;
They may be multiple images from distant lands.
The sea has tones of color, black to green
And graded pallor, translucent in the frothing
Foam of billows.The sea is placid in the bay,
Assuring us in a gentle way:No freezing now,
Just a cool day in your tropical time zone.

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Saturday, March 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,colors,sea,shadows,touring,usa
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A version of this experience was in my diary of a visit to Los Angeles in 1996.The uncanny impression of a bright street lamp on the shadows
a pedestrian makes unwarily, seem to resemble the multiple images and thoughts that fleet through the mind of a tourist.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2018

A strong shadow, stalking me, suddenly Lunged forward and overtook me. It was my flitting alter ego. through ur experience and imagination you are presenting a great truth..... our old Ego. liked it very much dear poet. tony

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Nudershada Cabanes 24 March 2018

A beautiful poem with wonderful imagery. Night is full of shadow on a lonely walk at night.. Well crafted poem.10

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A. Madhavan 24 March 2018

Your interpretation is pertinently metaphorical. Thank you sincerely. Best wishes,

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A. Madhavan 24 March 2018

The note I have given on this entry may, I hope, elicit similar comments from a few readers.

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