A Laborer's Spouse Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Laborer's Spouse

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Fire is set leaving behind an aurora on sky,
Birds are back to the nests, no more fly,
The stars with moon take off their flight,
Ahead of them is a pleasant night,
The tired laborer has dived in the ocean,
Deep very deep with love and passion,
In the arms of his appealing mermaid,
I don't see but heard what is said,
Waves whisper with the naughty sand,
Show of love is charming and grand,
Laborer is fresh his sweat is dissolved,
All the issues in a moment are resolved.
A woman is still waiting for spouse,
With children at the door of her house,
Looking so innocent in her trodden shirt,
To wipe his sweat and remove the dirt,
He has got a job that's why he is late,
For a night of love it's a day of fate,
Fumes of fire wood will repel the insects,
Mosquitoes interrupt, the joy imperfects,
Some oil I shall bring my lantern will be lit,
After many days in light we shall sit,
An evening with joys of delicious foods,
And after that the romantic moods,
Three days were passed on the baked grains,
Tonight the bread will remove the pains,
Shall bring my earnings by sewing and stitching,
Tomorrow he will see my delicious dishing,
Know what at lunch he likes to look,
Not so many but one I shall cook,
From nearby mosque my son who brings,
Few buckets of water to wash many things,
Including the tires of his old manual bike,
Neat and clean I love and like,
Like animals laborers pass their lives,
But a few days that are made by the wives.

Tuesday, May 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: labor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2016

A beautiful poem, encompassing the life of a labourer. Fantastic imagery to start the poem off.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Very deep with love and passion! Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 May 2016

What a beautiful poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2016

To wipe his sweat and remove the dirt. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

Those who have to sweat appreciates life better and a bit of hardship will build mental strengh Thank you sir1-10

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Kelly Kurt 10 May 2016

Many of the jobs I have worked throughout my life have been hard manual labor. Often, people would ask me why I do such jobs when I am so smart and creative. My answer is always, because I like it. There is a dignity in sweat, a pride in effort and a bond with comrades in the same sharing the same toil. a 10

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Seema Chowdhury 08 May 2016

Very narrative and a meaningful write

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Like animals labourers pass their lives........A wonderful line, a full description of the labourers life. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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