A Journey.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Journey..

Rating: 5.0

Two hearts travelled, parallel in life,
Though, several nights and days came and gone.

You and I remained alone, though people came and gone,
And the caravan of life moved on.

Reached several milestones and kept proceeding,
When looked back at the journey, saw the mist and smoke.

Did not find someone, to talk out my heart,
My thought remained in my heart and the heart in darkness.

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दो दिलों के फ़ासलों को उम्र भर जलना पड़ा
रात आयी और गई दिन आया और गया

तुम अकेले भीड़ में मै भी अकेला भीड़ में
लोग आये और गए कारवां चलता गया

मंज़िलें मिलती गई और हौसले बढ़ते गए
मुड़ के जब पीछे को देखा धुंध और धुंआ मिला

यूँ तो अक्सर बात करने को न कोई भी मिला
राज़ दिल में ही रहा और दिल अंधेरों में रहा

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Marvellous poem on the journey of love and life. Parallel journey of two hearts never meet anywhere. When looking back on the journey only fog and smoke are seen

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Susan Williams 19 February 2021

Reached several milestones and kept proceeding, When looked back at the journey, saw the mist and smoke.------ This is such wondrous writing, letting your reader into your heart and mind while at the same time creating atmosphere and environment... 5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 18 February 2021

Glorious piece.....dear friend....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 February 2021

A poem of great depth. So thought provoking. A beautiful and well crafted poem.

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2021

Yes we should not miss the opportunity to speak our heart out.

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 February 2021

DJ admire your skillful writing. Full marks.

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Jane Selbie 23 February 2021

The phrase "caravan of life" really captures an image. Thank you for your poem.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 22 February 2021

A soulful journey. Nice poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 February 2021

The truth of life and relationships so beautifully expressed in both English and Hindi through this interesting poem.5 starsg

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