A Guest Of Her Majesty For Friend Thad Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

A Guest Of Her Majesty For Friend Thad

Rating: 5.0


Brunhilde Bloggs no fixed address.
Was very fond of cheap red wine.
Somewhat disordered in her dress.
Her voice a grating nasal whine.

She begs for cash from passersby.
Her manner almost threatening.
Her raging thirst to satisfy
at each refusal glowering.

A policeman tells her “move along”
and she reacts aggressively
Insists she has done nothing wrong.
But he has little sympathy

He has no choice but to arrest
and take her into custody.
She has become a public pest.
Which no one is allowed to be

Brunhilde Bloggs has an address
at least for several months to come.
She got what she deserved no less
but she was luckier than some.

Who passed out cold and froze to death
in some back alley out of sight.
A victim to cold winters breath
in drunken dreams of sheer delight.

11-Sep-08

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koyel Mitra 26 September 2008

Nice story and rhyming scheme.Liked it! A 10!

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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

You have a brave and generous heart, wonderfully written and good flow. thanks for sharing Michael

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Meggie Gultiano 03 January 2010

I love your flow of words and your rhyming.Wish I can do that. A nice and touching piece.

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Thad Wilk 04 May 2009

Hi Ivor! ! A fascinating & poignant poem and story! Her disorderly conduct kept her alive thru' that winter the many others, not so lucky. A great read about a growing problem in this society... Best regards ! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Costa Anakiev 08 February 2009

sir igor, a very well written story, i enjoyed again.

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David Desantis 26 September 2008

haha great story...poor woman, but atleast she's not dead....is this a recollection of a true story? ? ? Pity beggars, it is fortunate that we have all we have..

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

ivor or ivor.e hogg

Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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