A Great Someone☺ Poem by michelle al G

A Great Someone☺

Rating: 4.0


young i was
you wanted to take me with you
taking me from my parents
just a kid i was
can't turn on the gas
Being kind, you were
sick you became
A cure you want
staying around you can't
You are far away
I was delay
hearing my voice after years
made you without a fear
Your prayers came true
without even a clue
Time after time
Calling you i want to do
You were at the hospital due
Your sickness
glad you were just to hear my voice
you gave up to the noise
and went to the sky
just to fly.!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 26 May 2010

A beautiful poem with poignancy flowing softly through it. Very well written! I rate it 8/10. Thanks

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