A Girl Poem by black broken heart

A Girl

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There was this girl,
I used to know
She never let her feelings
Ever show.
But that girl changed her friends,
So that was the end,
of my little friend.

She now says ‘her life rots’
And when she looks in the mirror
she wants to chuck.
so she should
for she left behind this hurt
the hole in my heart where
she used to go.
But I guess she is more important than I
And that really makes me cry,
Cry so much,
That I cut and I cut and I cut.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Saqib 20 March 2009

sad thoughts but sweet good write dear saqib

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Aijaz Asif 06 November 2008

wow its sad and dark write beautifuly penned in rhymical way....as dark poetries are my favs..thanks keep writting and stop hurting or cutting urself.. t.care asif

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