A Fractured Soul Poem by Marilyn Lott

A Fractured Soul

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Did you ever get so weary
That you think you can’t go on?
You reach inside yourself
To find a part that may be strong?

I know just what you’re feeling
For I too have been to that space
You feel anxious and depressed
And want to be at a different place

Sometimes it takes a lot of thinking
But it takes a lot of praying too
For God is a willing friend
Who will always be there for you

I know He seems so distant
He can’t sit upon your chair
But if you truly reach inside your heart
You will always find Him there

So please, my friend, be patient
And treat God as your best friend
He will help you make the choices
He’ll help your fractured soul to mend!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted Sheridan 29 August 2007

Thanks, I'm there right now...trying to get out of the muck but my feet seem stuck

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Kesav Easwaran 15 February 2009

God is a willing friend..true words...but as you said well, the responsibility willing, to reach him out is vested in us...good meaningful poem, Marilyn...10

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Diane Montemayor 18 February 2009

Ma'am, I pray that my fractured soul be healed. Thanks

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 December 2009

This is a beautiful poem with a 'Lotts' of healing and consoling effects and aspects. Thanks Marilyn. Best Regards. Naseer

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Nikunj Sharma 25 November 2009

from a poetess who writes a LOTT See now, what you got! ! ! Words of wisdom and patience With her simple words and common sense.. Go and play at leisure.... U know God's there, shall take care of fracture...

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Ranjit Ravindran 28 September 2009

I liked the title: 'A Fractured Soul', wisely choosen! I bet every one on the face of this earth needs this advice at some point in their life. A sweet 10

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Mamta Agarwal 13 May 2009

very spiritual poem, we have all been there and find eventually He alone is by your side.10+ Mamta

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Thad Wilk 30 March 2009

Wonderfully expressed Marilyn! God IS everyone's friend! He is everywhere, He always there. On the Lord you can depend... Best wishes! *10*! Friend Thad

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Marilyn Lott

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