A Fantasy Poem by jeffrey knox

A Fantasy



somebody please
just free me from the nonsense
maybe to being unconscious
cuz maybe unconscious can take me to a place where i can become conscious
take me to a place where the stars i can bond with
combine the sun with the moon just let it be common put sense with the common and maybe accomplish
im out of this world please just let it be
im back on this earth i just came from a fantasy...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephanie Starr 01 August 2009

Ohh i like this poem! It's dark and bright, exotic and evil at the same time, with shades of grey. Keep writing, you have talent.

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