A Dot Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Dot

Rating: 5.0


In the pale blue sky
It's like a dot
And I imagined
Whether a bird or a butterfly?
Though a fledged still she gathers the passing clouds as wings
To flee in the uncertain visionary vista.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 June 2010

Levitating metaphor galore…dot has become jocund spot ……. thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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