A Different Captive Poem by Seema Aarella

A Different Captive

Rating: 5.0


On one fine day unexpectedly
The encampment of sorrowing
Barrenness In the mundane interior
Of my home and heart was invaded by a
Lightening fast renaissance brigade

Reluctant gloom was at once
Vanquished by a strong contingent
Of desires, that marched in their
Shining armour and liberated my mood
With a kaleidoscope of million suns

I never remained the same
Ever since I gave up fight and got
Imprisoned in their lustrous cell
Where I was granted a daily banquet
Of creativity and dream enriched siesta

I preferred the life in chains of desire
Holding me in undisturbed solitude
Allowing only the just essential urge
To feel, ponder and brood before
Penning the unedited songs of my heart.

Sunday, June 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 28 June 2009

lovely composed poem...nice flow of words...

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Indira Babbellapati 28 June 2009

a fine piece of writing...

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a beautiful warm feeling and writing..

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R.k Das 29 June 2009

nice to see you in captivity, do unfold your creative desire to the optimum when you are still a captive, intense poem, thanx

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Braja K Sarkar 29 July 2009

Very nice poem.Thanks to Seema.A creative person is always free, a free thinker in captivity.Come on Seema, think BIG and write great..

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Rakesh Bedi 10 July 2009

.... I preferred the life in chains of desire.....; conveys volumes and volumes of poets state of mind, quite different and a nice expression!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 July 2009

poignant............beautifully penned......chosen words are WOW! 10+

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premji premji 04 July 2009

you are very clear, bold and have absolute passion for poetry........thanks for this wonderful poem..........

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Nooruddeen Mm 30 June 2009

Seema Nice work, beautifully composed Thank you.. Regards, Noor

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