A Diamond In The Dust Poem by Peter Strugnell

A Diamond In The Dust

Rating: 4.8


I'm not saying that it's easy for you,
I know you've been let down before,
you aren't sure you wanna start something new,
you're tired and don't wanna hurt anymore.

But life's too short to live it alone,
in a world devoid of all affection,
I want more than just to talk on the phone,
I wanna give you more than conversation.

More precious to me that silver and gold,
in a world that's grown weary and old,
love and affection from the woman I trust,
I need to find a diamond in the dust, a diamond in the dust.

The years go by way too fast,
to still be carrying the weight of the past,
so before my bones turn to rust,
I need to find a diamond in the dust, a diamond in the dust.


You may think that nothing ever lasts,
and you don't want it to be like it was before,
you say be careful of my heart of glass,
but I just wanna care for you even more.

I know it's down to me to let you know,
your heart may still be undecided,
can't promise you a perfect tomorrow,
but I would never let you be misled.


More precious to me that silver and gold,
in a world that's grown weary and old,
love and affection from the woman I trust,
I need to find a diamond in the dust, a diamond in the dust.

A Diamond In The Dust
Wednesday, January 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: doubt,future,hurt,loneliness,love,love and life,lovers,past
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love declaration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A nice poem with good rhyming pattern. Well as par finding diamond in the dust, Faith Keeps Those Who Keep The Faith - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Vipins Puthooran 20 January 2012

This's a fantastic poem, , , , , ,10*

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Ramesh Rai 20 January 2012

I know it's down to me to let you know your heart may still be undecided can't promise you a perfect tomorrow but i would never let you be misled i like it. xlent write

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Peter Strugnell 08 February 2011

many thanks Malaya Roses for the kind words, i did my best to be rythmical, and keep it true!

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Malaya Roses 07 February 2011

Persistence and determination shall make her loving you till the end. The poet was successfully built a poem with every stanza ended rhythmically and that's so beautiful to read. Keep love her and try to love her more. 10/10

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