A Day More To Live Poem by Loyd C Taylor Sr

A Day More To Live

Rating: 5.0


In the darkness,
He's wandering aimlessly on;
Who's searching for him?

In the shadows dim,
Wondering deep down inside,
Will time run out soon?

In the chilling rain,
Bargaining for one more day,
Will God hear his cries?

In the awaking dawn,
Harboring his soul to faith,
A day more to live!

© Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Friday, March 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone with the wind 02 July 2008

So much in so less words. Simply awesome. a 10 Best wishes

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Thad Wilk 01 November 2008

A lovely poem Loyd! Heartfelt and capturing - that hope. Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Galina Italyanskaya 23 November 2014

A wonderful thought-provoking poem! I think that the question in the first stanza is key. People often think that they have not enough time to live. Actually they find not enough reasons. But it's too hard to admit. I wish your hero to reveal those reasons, and all days will be his. And I love the closing stanza.

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Yash Shinde 25 May 2014

It breath is a gift, and your wisdom a priceless possession! You said so much in those few lines! A powerful and intriguing write my friend.!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 May 2014

each breath a gift, each moment momentous, great thought Loyd.

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Roseann Shawiak 27 December 2013

My prayer used to be for one more day, now it's a prayer for one more moment. You have a beautiful soul Loyd!

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Marilyn Lott 30 November 2008

I think there are so many people just hoping for one more day. Your heart is full of compassion, Lloyd and it comes out in your poems. A '10! ' for sure, my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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