Hello again, I’m hear once more, not to fill your heads with rhymes but my feelings in store, feelings of a close friend, someone I adore. Please do me this favor, judge not too harshly, for the person I speak off is to my heart so dearly
She has no joy, yet she cries not
She has no food yet she needs not
She has no friends yet she wants not
She has no god yet she sins not
She has no love yet she hates not
She has life yet she lives with ought truly living
Thanks for your time, I hope it wasn’t wasted, for I promise, the next time I write my words won’t be hasted. Keep this in mind, on request I’ll surely rhyme for the person that needs a poem, my best I’m sure to find.
criticism even from one's enemy, for me... i welcome like a friend, especially when i visit their home, and i invite it... and i'm honest.
wow! ! eventhough it rhyms too much! ! this writting shows how much you adore this person truly... how much strong and appreciative this person is! ! well your writting is wonderful! you express very wonderfully... good luck! ! love, karen!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting poem that works on several levels. I felt concern and and caring for the subject of this poem.