A Complicated Feeling... Poem by Rudy Hossam
A Complicated Feeling...
I said I'll write...
And for the first time...
I couldn't think of words to say...
I couldn't find something to help...
I felt a feeling...
I couldn't express...
It hurts...but it's great...
It's painful...but it's worth it...
Every word I think of...
Just about to put it down...
It's total opposite...
Comes by my mind....
I find it also fit to use...
The feeling is complicated...
More than I thought...
I feel alone...though accompanied...
I feel accompanied...though alone...
It makes me cry...but I know I'm glad...
It makes me laugh...but I know I'm sad...
It makes me strong...when actually I'm weak...
It makes me weak...when actually I'm strong...
I feel my heart bleeding from no wound...
I feel my heart dancing from a great cut...
I know you think I'm crazy....
And here is another thing...I'M NOT...
If I were crazy...I wouldn't mind...
At lest I'd know...why I feel so UNKNOWN...
Nicely composed poem about the complexity of emotions. Everything has its opposites-there are some scientists who think there are parallel universes in which everything that happens to us happens exactly the opposite way. Good work.
Pairs of opposites lead to complicated feeling and confusion-the situation is well composed as a poem.
this, to me a really great poem that a lot of people can relate to 10++++++++
Great poem, , , the contrasts in this poem really emphasis the meaning....10/10. keep it up..... Merna Ibrahim.
o, there comes moments, when we need these words. thanks that ou pleased us.
I said I'll write... And for the first time... I couldn't think of words to say... I couldn't find something to help... Simply love it.... It totaly express poetry writing... GREAT...well done
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 11:29:33 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Rudy Dear, sometimes i have the same feeling thats why i can understand you. you know maybe we feel that we are lost sweat-heart. nice poem.....keep writing because you have the talent.