A Butterfly In Neon Gas Poem by Jenny Kalahar

A Butterfly In Neon Gas

Rating: 4.4


a butterfly in neon gas
flashing candied colors
breathing that which
exhaling that which
makes him light and glow and nearly dead
and exploding in slow motion
and grabbing glory
and flying higher for a moment
trapped in glass in dome in hand
yet freer than any other
a Japanese symbol of his former self
a haiku version of biography in flight
a mass of molecules unlike the night
he glows until the sun outshines him
when he'll light his own short path to heaven

A Butterfly In Neon Gas
Wednesday, April 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,freedom,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 01 May 2019

short lived things are more treasured by god, is one argument

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2022

a butterfly in neon gas flashing candied colors breathing that which exhaling that which makes him light and glow and nearly dead.......nice conceptualiazation.Beautiful poem..

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Sankaran Ayya 01 May 2020

unnatural light and natural colorful creature! Lo natural death trap! a Japanese symbol of his former self a haiku version of biography in flight - - WELL SAID WISHES FOR MERITTING DAY'S POEM LIST POET Jenny Kalahar

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Jenny Kalahar 03 May 2020

Thank you kindly, Sankaran! - Jenny

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Lyn Paul 01 May 2020

Thank you for reminding me how wonderful your poetry is. A True Poet you are.

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Jenny Kalahar 03 May 2020

I'm honored by your praise, Lyn! Thank you! - Jenny

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Savita Tyagi 01 May 2020

Thought provoking and well crafted. Observations of nature invoke a marvelous poem.

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Jenny Kalahar 01 May 2020

Thank you so much, Savita! - Jenny

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 May 2020

a Japanese symbol of his former self a haiku version of biography in flight a mass of molecules unlike the night..///beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected this as POD

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Jenny Kalahar 01 May 2020

Thank you so much, Mahtab! - Jenny

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