A Burning Sun Poem by David Harris

A Burning Sun

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Sitting in a serene silence
having left chaos behind
away from the world
and its daily grind.
Sitting and letting your mind
stretch to freedom
and new universes find.
We can reach out
for any star we choose,
enlighten our world with knowledge
that comes from an inner truth.
Just sitting and pondering
as the world goes on by,
soaking up the things
like a coral sponge.
Making the road more tangible
for the day when we have to run
the mile of enlightenment
underneath a burning sun.

16 July 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 July 2008

Your topic today is learning my friend, well every day you learn some thing new... Andy 10

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Vincent James Turner 16 July 2008

nice poem David although the rhymes come accross as a little forced, however there is a strong messsage in this poem, and you manage to avoid coming over all preachy. nice work Regardo Vincent

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