A Broken Body! A Condemned Soul! Poem by Christian Eliab Ratnam

A Broken Body! A Condemned Soul!

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In a wooden nest lies a body.
A body lies lifelessly there.
A bag of bones.
A memoir on woes.
A body lies lifelessly there.

In a sealed trunk lies a body.
A body lies lifelessly there.
A disguise of flesh.
A cover of sand.
A body lies lifelessly there.

In a funeral attraction lies a body.
A body lies lifelessly there.
A vulture's dinner.
A maggot's appetizer.
A body lies lifelessly there.

In a disposal case lies a body.
A body lies lifelessly there.
An expired vehicle.
A dried up lake.
A body lies lifelessly there.

Before the throne is present a soul.
A soul awaiting judgment there.
An amnesty avoider.
A mercy averter.
A soul burns permanently there.

Copyright © Christian Eliab Ratnam 2012
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francis Duggan 23 January 2008

This is a good poem Christian sort of makes one think very well written

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 22 February 2006

I am loving this poem and the source of repition makes all the while more beautiful Great job. Love, Melissa

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