### A Bite Of Being Apart Poem by sarwar chowdhury

### A Bite Of Being Apart

Rating: 3.7


That the eyes burning …….. Intense inferno
Don’t afraid you friends The eyes can
Smile heartful in the hellhole A bite
Of being apart imposed on Love tuneful
Captured right he and she Foaming tempestuous sea!
Said- come on love …………Swim to sense the yummy YUMMY!

-August,2009-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 20 August 2009

You are one of kind indeed Sarwar..., .... this again is very entertaining and nice to read.. as always I read it like couple of time, very musical and nice to read..10+++ cheers// best wishes shan

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Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

I like the way you have written this Sarwar, thanks 10 Lynda x

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lovelt write.. i lov ehte creativity you used in forming it.

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Beauty Philosophy 21 August 2009

A lovely new style of poetry stemming from a creative poet!

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Carol Rhodes 21 August 2009

SARWAR, YES, YOU'VE VENTURED INTO A NEW GENRE, ONE YOU CREATED, AND IT'S FUN TO READ. WHAT I ENJOYED MOST IS THE SENSITIVITY, THE IN-THE-MOMENT CONNECTION TO FEELINGS AND TRUE DISPLAY OF HONEST EMOTIONS. THANK YOU!

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Anand Madhukar 17 September 2009

Your style takes a little getting used to, but once the reader has done that, its pure magic.

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Supriya Prathapan 12 September 2009

You have a very unique style of writing.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 29 August 2009

Crisp, sweet love poem.A few metaphors used nicely.Well done Sarwar

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 August 2009

Sir..this is indeed a very creative piece...compelling...the title is what attracted me the most..I loved it..10

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Allan Macli Borges 27 August 2009

interesting one. very creative idea. keep it up.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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