♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ Poem by RIC BASTASA

♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫

Rating: 2.7


Keep talking ﮮ
while i sing

♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫

My heart ♥

We bask under the sun


The two of us
ﻀ ﻀ

but not so close please




ﻀ ﻀ


Where there is still a space for me to smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charity Nduhiu 16 September 2015

This one is real fun. I like the song

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Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2014

Unique way of expressing yourself, very nice. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Jennifer Chalk 25 April 2012

This made me smile! ! I just love the shapes. Cheers!

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Lillian Thomas 20 September 2009

very nice! concise, let's me have room to think about it and let the poem echo inside, finding its meaning.

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