(863) Missing You (((3))) Poem by Melvina Germain

(863) Missing You (((3)))

Rating: 3.6


An eclipse of the heart,
rips the soul apart.
Nostalgic promises, never to behold.
Standing alone at the alter,
my love you loudly sold.

Written: Date: Feb.11/07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful piece of poetry which leaves the reader standing at the alter alone...great imagery and just a well written piece of poetry. Keep up the great work ((Smile)) =Shelley=

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David Harris 17 February 2007

Melvina, sad, but so aptly true at times. Must be everyone dread standing alone at the alter. Great poem and expertly done. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Dee Daffodil 16 February 2007

Poignant! Hugs, dee

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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