7th Day - Reality Poem by Jeremy Horsford
7th Day - Reality
Day 1: We awoke as unknowns.
Day 2: We awoke as unknowns. We crossed
one another whilst attempting to fulfil
our commitments.
Day 3: We awoke as unknowns. We crossed
one another whilst attempting to fulfil
our commitments. You smiled, I tripped
and fell.
Day 4: We awoke as unknowns. We crossed
one another whilst attempting to fulfil
our commitments. You smiled, I tripped
and fell. You offered me a helping hand.
Day 5: We awoke as unknowns. We crossed
one another whilst attempting to fulfil
our commitments. You smiled, I tripped
and fell. You offered me a helping hand.
We departed.
Day 6: We awoke as unknowns. We crossed
one another whilst attempting to fulfil
our commitments. You smiled, I tripped
and fell. You offered me a helping hand.
We departed. I stared.
Day 7: Only if...
I really like the style of this poem: the build up is great and the ending is as well. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 8:46:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I liked the style of this poem. The build up and ending were excellent. Great write.
Thank you. An attempt at trying to understand where my preferred style sits.