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Everybody says that
we are nipper to be in love.
But, I want to ask them
what is the real age to be in love? ? ? ? ? ?
Love is free from boundaries of age,
love is like a bird,
which dont care about any thing in his path,
which fly to reach his destination,
which is mad about his goals,
which can do any thing to achieve his goal, ...............
Love is like a river,
which is running to meet sea,
which can do anything to meet her love,
which can cross every problems
like a insane to reach her destination.
Nobody can stop it to achieve his goals.......
Love is like rain,
which is falling from clouds to meet his love.
to unite with earth.
which is not caring about the pain he will get,
which only want to be with his love...............
Love is like a sunflower,
which just want to see her love.
which just want to laud the sun,
which is standing all the day to admire her love..............
a great simile of love poem..nice write and its beautiful.....10
Love can’t be confined…and you have nicely captured the flow The person for whom you wrote this will definitely be impressed And so am I… :)
You can be in love at any age. See my poem The First Time for an example.
well yeah romantic.....and nice comparisions...... but its like to me it seems like there is something wrong with it.......u could have written better.....well i don't know.....just seems like that to me...........
It's a very good write. And you did a good job sticking to the theme. Thanks for the suggestion I give it a 9.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:59:13 PM # 1.0.0.1119
nice...a good poem.. liked reading it....