๒ г ƹ ค к ย ק Poem by rahul sharma
๒ г ƹ ค к ย ק
It might hurt you,
but our relation is at a point,
where we both have to be serious.
It might make you cry,
but the love between,
both of us is decreasing.
It might give you a shock,
but i will be with,
you as a friend.
It might creat a panic,
inside you but,
we both have to do this.
It might feel you,
like you are losing everything,
but this is also difficult for me.
But we have to go apart.
we have to find our new world.
we have to start our new life.
WE HAVE TO BREAK UP! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
the concept behind the poem and the feel is good, but what i feel is as a poem it would be could if you can use some rhyming and flow in it...
Well, goodness..... it is certainly to the point, a bit brusque... but a nice poem never the less.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 12:36:32 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Sorry to say it, but this is not a poem. It is a piece of prose written in short lines. You don't have to use rhyme, but there has to be some rhythm or flow to it.