3 Words (They Still Stand) Poem by Daryl lyraD

3 Words (They Still Stand)

Rating: 4.8


3 words I have
for you and
only yours 2 hear.

I love you,
forever and ever,
I still do.

I miss you,
now and then,
since the beginning.

I need you,
by my side
all the time.

It hurts much
when you're there,
but not really there.

I wish, I wish, I wish
Everything was perfect.
It was, nearly perfect

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelly Shelly 27 August 2009

my goodnesssss.. It hurts much when you're there, but not really there. really amazing.. loved loved loved the small 3 words lines 10

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Omar Ibrahim 23 August 2009

it's a good poem and you knew how express your feelings through the poem.....keep writing and you have to know that you have a talent that you have to develop more and more....i give it 10

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Peri Morgan 15 August 2009

Truly goes to show that if you really do love some one, that feeling never leaves us. Thank you for sharing.

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Trinidad Villafranca 13 April 2009

very good very good

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