3 Wishes Poem by Chester Tiu

3 Wishes



***December 4,2007 @ 5: 01pm***

.....QL
.....A woman
.....Esme

If you only know
I would love to be with you
And make slow move
only with you
Hugging you so tightly
Is what i want nightly
Cherishing and enjoying
every scene
until we collapse
into each other arms smiling

F only i had three wishes
definitely i would
give away two
coz nothing in this world
i really wanted
but a ONE chance
to be with you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 21 July 2008

Your thoughts are really stable but I find your poem can go on to be more complete with more imagery and aspirations. Thanks for sharing, arya

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Lou Embalsado 15 April 2008

sweet, sweet poetry.. the chesse makes it sooo good! ! ! wow u just made my day...

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