(3) Empty Space Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(3) Empty Space

Rating: 3.1


It is dusk again.
Once more this time
and loneliness.

The birds are here
but the empty space
remains.

Something got lost
against the grain.
The wind blows,
silence stays.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

simply great! ! ! ....well done..keep writting! ! ^_^ dana

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Sandra Fowler 04 April 2008

Spare, elegant imagery. Excellent write, Luis. Good to read you again. Warm regards, Sandra

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