((12) Breakfast With Diamonds Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente
((12) Breakfast With Diamonds
A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.
I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
compasionate eyes,
filling me with motionless
sweet energy.
Peace, wide forehead,
translucient skin
of your huge eyed look,
Amelia.
I wish you could feel the diamonds.
What the previous 6 people said... cool poem.... Diamonds can cut severely and cleanly...
This is a beautiful poem Luis. Admittedly it was the title that caught me but I am so glad that it has. The flow and the lovely imagery are a real treat.
Umm i expected a yummy breakfast spread, but this one was beautiful. very well written! Preets
Hugely successful poem, Luis. Captures a precious sense of life's best. - Will
wow! ! ! ! ! excellent--- I not only felt the diamonds but the corals rubies and sapphires too regards anjali
loving...encouraging...enthusing...this diamond write...who is more lucky there? 10
How Lovely. Your soul and heart are beautiful and full of appreciation for the one you love. Please read my poem A Shadow, an Echo.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Short and sweet, no better way, no better subject