(2) Trapeze Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(2) Trapeze

Rating: 2.9


Your life is in my hands.
I will make you fly.
I will learn to let go,
I will feel your fear
and your joy.

I will let rats rot
to become a bird.

How to explain
I am nothing
when I get down
from the trapeze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yufen Liou 10 April 2009

I would get rid of ' will' actually it is: my life is in your hand, I make you fly with me, however, I have to learn let go, I feel fear, I feel the joy, That is the destiny between you and me.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 October 2008

A fine poem captured beyond real phenomena! on the other hand, what I see is, In this world millions people living life as rats life! of course 10++++++++ for this thoughtfull piece

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