Shriveling the spirit
Without healing in the vicinity
Transcending the suffering
Without scuttling of memories
Afflicting the gratification
Without acceptance of the feeling
Confronting the pains
Without love engaging the soul
Resenting the attempt to intervene my life
Without repulsion left in store
I go hunting for the unknown
Come finding the thrown
That is open to the winds
But close to my heart!
17 8 09
nice visual extended metaphor: ''Come finding the thrown That is open to the winds But close to my heart'' wonderful poem...............10
profound...the inner journey...ethereal realms..unknown..well said
The process is never ending...the search is only true, the result has been unknown, what we are looking for and what we finally get? its like going in circles, yet grounded to where we are...bound by unseen shackles. interesting write! ! ! ! !
It is not that much easy, as you say, to find the unknown, though He is sitting in the very heart of one's self. It may even take several births of one to realize Him. This is one of the thought provoking poems indeed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I go hunting for the unknown Come finding the thrown That is open to the winds But close to my heart! ------------ great just great poetic lines.................10/10