13 (Sakuntala) The Trouble Started Poem by Rajaram Ramachandran

13 (Sakuntala) The Trouble Started

Rating: 5.0


The friends of Sakuntala,
Anusuya and Pryamvada,
Brought flowers from garden
As their daily routine.

Anusuya said, “Sakuntala
Married King Dushyanta,
Who’s now in his palace,
Leaving her in this place.”

‘I’ve a doubt, how far
He’ll remember her
In the political situations
And other compulsions.”

Pryamvada said, “He’s great,
And will never do like that,
But how her father will take,
Here, when he comes back? ”

Anusuya replied, “Yes,
This marriage, he’ll bless.
As without his efforts,
It was arranged by Gods.”

It was at this moment,
Sage Durvasa went
And knocked the gate
Of the Sakuntala’s hut.

She was preoccupied
With her past deeds,
So, she didn’t respond
When the Sage knocked.

He was terribly upset
And cursed her for that.
“You arrogant girl,
You’ll face trouble.”

“I stood at your door step.
But you didn’t open it up.
You’ve forgotten all others
Excepting the one of yours.”

“Never will you remain,
In the memory of his own,
Even if the past events,
Are taken to his notice.”

Both her friends begged,
“Oh Sage, pardon this maid,
This is her first offence,
Of ignoring your presence.”

The Sage said, “My curse
Will never become false.
If any of his jewel is shown
Back his memory will return.”

She had the royal ring
Given to her by the King.
So, they were happy
At the Sage’s mercy.

They decided, “Let us keep it
Away from her, as a secret,
As it’ll be a shock to her
If it goes into her ears.”

This way, the trouble started.
Her bad days were ahead.
The innocent pious girl
Faced the first ordeal.

(Note: Durvasa was a hot
tempered Sage and gave
curses to anyone, who
disrespected him)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raman Savithiri 05 June 2008

For such a small mistake such a severe curse! Innocent and pure hearted Sakundala deserve such a pitiless curse? My heart trembles. With short cute lines... the way you tell stories is excellent.

0 0 Reply
Joseph Daly 30 May 2008

I like this Rajaram, and what you are doing with that classic form. It is somehat like Coldridge in approach yet has that feel of Rumi. That is not to say that you copy their style, it is the use of a story. I wouldn't like to see this simply as a children's poem, I think there is a lot more going on in this that would otherwise be missed.

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 30 May 2008

Never a dull moment in the life of the beautiful Sakuntala. But I have a feeling that she will not be forgotten either by her king or your interested readers. Great write, Rajaram. Your poetess friend, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Dr John Celes 29 May 2008

Interesting story-write in verse, that all Indians must read and enjoy. fit for children especially. WELL-DONE Poet RR! regards, dr john celes

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
Close
Error Success