A Bud Crushed Under The Foot Poem by Rajaram Ramachandran

A Bud Crushed Under The Foot

Rating: 4.5


The day’s newspaper shook my heart.
I can only shed a tear on my part.
A heartless father shot his daughter.
It was like an animal slaughter.

Her love for a boy was the cause.
She married him as her choice,
Not with her parents’ consent
That led to their utter dissent.

Her father, to teach a lesson,
He invited the boy in person,
For a talk in a public place,
Just to break their alliance.

Her mother became serious,
Her father became furious,
When the talk failed at last,
As the kids stood steadfast.

Father had in his pocket hidden,
A pistol normally forbidden,
Two or three rounds he shot,
And gave the boy a chase hot.

The boy escaped with a wound,
But the girl fell dead on the ground,
Her life sucked up by bullets three,
From the pistol that flew free.

Oh God, when this gun culture,
From this earth will disappear?
Why a father kills his daughter,
O’er such a simple love matter?

What for he bred her for years?
Had their eyes dried of tears?
Many lost lovers history has seen,
Now one more added, fresh and green.

(A news from 'Times of India' of 8-10-2005)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar ... 01 March 2008

touching poem depicting the extremism of love

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Katherine Wiley 01 April 2008

A very nice poem, senseless killings are always hard to understand. A well said sentiment. kate

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Subbaraman N V 06 July 2008

Most unfortunate- but then the society has such inhumans too!

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Kesav Easwaran 11 July 2008

conditional incomplete love leads to anger hatred ness and at times to cruelty and crime...a poem with a good message 10

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Indira Renganathan 24 July 2008

Great people write great.A good moral poem.My appreciation

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 October 2022

Necessity crushes everything but no life in the law kingdom of inhumane love!

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Bharati Nayak 19 October 2022

It is a heart wrenching poem, but the reflects the reality of Indian society where such occurings are not uncommon.In the name of family's honour many girls are killed.Society has changed a lot.Still mindset of people has changed little.

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Bri Edwards 19 October 2022

I give 4 stars, but....'Why a father kills his daughter, O'er such a simple love matter? ' Obvioulsy it was NOT a 'simple love matter'. Many are not. And maybe the parent(s) knew 'better', but a gun and violence should not be used. : (

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Nabakishore Dash 19 October 2022

Heart rending poem written in very simple and appropriate words dear poetRamachandran. This happens with absurd people who never change their mind with changing time.

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A heart-wrenching story. Lovely poem by Rajaramji. A well-deserved recognition as POD today. May his soul rest in peace.

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Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
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