1 Hour Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

1 Hour

Rating: 5.0


Drift!
Rift,
Shift,
Swift! !
Trapped in the lift;
For,
1 hour! ! !
Before someone came along,
To rescue me.

Friday, August 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 15 January 2022

1 hour is sufficient enough to....

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2020

Trapped in the lift for 1 hour! ! ! Real experience. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Kostas Lagos 28 August 2020

Excellent poem with the least words possible!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Odds of life to face at times! ! ! Thanks for your comment on my poem Stay blessed always.

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Varsha M 28 August 2020

All 'ft' on one plane to reduce the gift meant to serve nation. Good one Sir.

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