06/11/2016 Poem by yada yada yada

06/11/2016

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I do not feel this way because you are beautiful.
The waves in your hair and the creases on your face do not cause my suffering.
But without you, I am a flower with no petals, a tree with no leaves, a night sky with no stars.
To me, you are like a bus ride home when the sun is just beginning to set.
You are the blue of the sky, the colours of the earth.
And I thank God, because without you, we would all be nothing.

Tuesday, May 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,earth,flower,hair,leaves,longing,sky,stars,suffering,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 11 August 2017

I think there is freshness in your expression of love and longing for the partner. This shows the importance of a loving member in the family. Thanks a lot, Rima.

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