04 Lost (My Favourite) Poem by Athul KrishnaA
04 Lost (My Favourite)
Darkness suddenly surrounded me
As i found myself lost deep within a forest,
I was surrounded by creatures unknown
Not a clue had i about my whereabouts
Lost in the forbidden forest,
I was scared and ran about,
To strike upon a tiny ray of light,
To get some relief from this horrible plight
Suddenly it began to get really hot
As i opened my eyes to see where I was
I was surprised to find myself awake
In my bedroom, in the middle of the night....
how many times i have got lost in my dreams. what a relief when we fynd it was a dream', nice poem
Understandably this is your favourite. You've expressed very well an unconscious fear of desertion. In a child it's a normal dream but few people are able to write a so fine poem.
nice poem. how many times i too have got lost in my dreams. only to discover with relief i am safe at home.
Hello Athul, I am so glad to read your poems. Keep it up. Tell sushant to start writing too, he too wrote wonderful pieces of composition.
this is really good. it says really well what i think we've all experienced at some stage hard concept to explain. well done
Good one, very familiar situation in a very articulate manner. I must say it is always a sigh of relief to know you are not alone.
I dont like it. I love it. You explain here something I could never explain... Why do I get lost in my dreams? ... That is how I feel sometimes but waking up also freaks me out... And dont ask me why...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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not bad... r u really 10 years old? haha... if u r... keep it up... better than me when i was 10years old... keep on riting dude!