[01] You Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[01] You

Rating: 5.0


If you wish I can format drive C
Can modify the setting
or change my operating system.

I don't want to quarrel
o my valued customer
I offer the highest discount
or arrange special gift for you.

I don't want to raze or delet you forever
o my anti-virus!



Poem 38
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 06 October 2008

hey nice one.. a very uncoventional poem... :)

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Late Sunrise 12 May 2009

Liked this one, for it made me laugh....not the 'YOU' we might have expected...

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Smiley Hooker 16 May 2009

ha ha ha! I thought it's a poem about love and affection. amusing! i love it! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) +++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

I don't want to raze or delet you forever.. worth noting... beautiful.. enjoyed....10

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 September 2009

amusing... cute... i was thinking another theme..(smile) 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 September 2009

amusing... cute... i was thinking another theme..(smile) 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Better anticlimax would have been not deleting Virus! And deleting anti-virus! This is the flip side. Nicely addressed. Ten dr. sakti

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Brishti Mazumdar 30 June 2009

Ha Ha Ha....Thank you for this small one....10++...for the cutie....

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