006 A Love Story Poem by Sandhya S.N

006 A Love Story

Rating: 5.0


A story evolved
Where he stumbled
It drew it tangle
Complex to compact
Poor…she too…
Stuck in the puzzle
Those sonic pictures
In the story
Ravish and reverberate
As if their minds
Those ardent bands
With strands of love
Twined their life
For eternal….


Sandhya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 30 October 2009

fantastic............ravish and reverberate.........a love story beautifully unveiled...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 October 2009

a beautiful picture of love....

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 18 November 2009

Twined their life For eternal….a lovely love story

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2009

a strings of strand of life.....a passive point of truth......wisdom catches it all.... thank for sharing...it's worth emulating....God bless...a 10 +

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2009

a good write on how love developes...how developed! 10

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premji premji 31 October 2009

invisible strands of love.....

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The Lost.. 30 October 2009

very nice poem...hope you comment on mine too :) thanx

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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