0000..... My First 10 Steps! Poem by Gan Chennai

0000..... My First 10 Steps!

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I don't remember my first steps
As child, I tried to make;
Now, as a grown up Adult
I attempt my first 10 steps.

GRATITUDE!
Oh! God Thank you
For this moment, for
I am just Happy for no Reason!

LOSS OF EGO!
With my Eyes, I see
My EGO Melting
What a pleasant Feeling it is!

AWARENESS!
I enjoy my Awareness
This Pure Stillness is Great
This Peace Quenches Every Thirst!

LOVE!
To Love Everyone
Is to become God Like
The Greatest Moment!

SURRENDER!
Oh! God! I Surrender
Let me be an Instrument
For you to Act on me

DEATH!
I don't Fear Death
This moment, I am Ready
For Death to act upon me

ONENESS!
I see Oneness
You in Me, Me in You
All are ONE!

BLISS!
The void of voids
The Nothingness
The End of Self!

ENLIGHTENMENT!
Nothing to Learn
We know Everything
Just Remembering!

END MEETS BEGINNING!
I am Everything
The Universe is in Me
I Always Exist!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 July 2010

ONENESS! I see Oneness You in Me, Me in You All are ONE! ~ The whole poetry lifts and parks emotion at a very higher level…quoted stanza is the highest in respect to Vedic spiritual aim 'Non Dualism' a.k.a. 'Monism' 'Advaita' path of Jnana… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Clicked as MPL n

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An all in all inspired poem. These ten steps are the steps of life. Well done! ; D

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Gita Ashok 23 June 2010

A great theme and well written, too. Way to go... looking forward to more steps.

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Otteri Selvakumar 05 May 2010

nice steps... with all ways at real life.... write very real...

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