Dare That I Should Gaze on Thee
And See The Things No One Can See
A Beauty Far Beyond Compare
And Grace as Kind as It is Fair
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Natural Woman
Dare That I Should Gaze on Thee
And See The Things No One Can See
A Beauty Far Beyond Compare
And Grace as Kind as It is Fair
I Wonder Dost Thou Even Know
The Depth of Radiance Thou Dost Show
Mere Word Can't Conjure All You Bare
Of Nature's Splendor Thou Dost Share
One Hundred Thousand Coal Seas Flow
And Peer To Soul Two Black Below
Café Smooth Shapes Womanly Cup
And Pours From Sole to Bend Volup
Curving Long Neath Shimmering Pearls
While Soft Above Lie Faintest Curl
Your Breath Like Breeze on Petal Dew
Floating Free I Fall Unto
Embrace Like Down I Hope Not Miss
As All Consumed at Once With Kiss
To anyone who reads my poem I would love your feedback on how I can make it better. I prefer to have it be metaphorical, but a friend suggested that I actually be more specific in the regard that I am referring to a woman. So for instance The coal seas refer to her black hair etc.
This is the only poem I have ever written in my life.