Ian (Dying for her)

Ian (Dying for her) Poems

As I am writing this, I hear you breathe...
quietly.... your breast softly rising....
you lay on my chest.
I'm looking down at you smiling... feeling like the luckiest man in the world to have the pleasure of seeing you like this...
...

To think... I almost forgot your smile, beautiful, bright perfect
Your lips, sweet, moist, soft
your eyes, innocent
your love pure...
...

I'm realizing now,
that I've truely messed up.
I lost my best friend,
and my dearest love.
...

Carresing your hair,
kissing your lips
biting your neck
massaging your back
...

Tonight I can't sleep
as I think about you
I try so hard not to weep
...

Ian (Dying for her) Biography

There isn't much to say about myself... Unless I was to actually write an autobiography, including a self description for no reason because somewhere down the line it's gonna get boring, and not get read! Any ways, I'm not a poet, but I've recently got in contact with the love of my life after losing her, and thats got me into a littlecreative thinking... she's the reason I'm a member here... so... I think that's preety much it... do feel free to talk though... later)

The Best Poem Of Ian (Dying for her)

To My Sweet Paris

As I am writing this, I hear you breathe...
quietly.... your breast softly rising....
you lay on my chest.
I'm looking down at you smiling... feeling like the luckiest man in the world to have the pleasure of seeing you like this...
at rest... at ease...
your face worry free... you wrapped in me...
stroking your hair... I replay our day we shared... our days that passed... and our days that may be to come.
I can't wait for the sun to rise... to see you rise... the way you do....
hear you sigh... see your newly rested face.
But then i dont wish for this to come... I know I'll have to leave you,
no I won't but you'll make me... I do not wish to.
I'll stay... I'll follow you.. not wanting to scare you... lose you I won't.
You tell meyou can't do us.... there's someone else... I don't believe you.
I won't leave without you... I can't live without you...
come with me.... you don't have to forget everything and everyone as I have... that was my choice...
but come with me, and let me love you.

Ian (Dying for her) Comments

you know... your thoughts/feelings are written nicely... but what you write shouldn't h urt/ruin other peoples lives, mkay? ... try writing one about how everything is all in your head..the one you love is a friend and nothing more... and stop embellishing everything for your own satisfaction.... there is NO us Ian...and has/will never be... thanks :) hate to sound harsh....(you know that's not me) but, besides that... you are a preety affectionate writer... and of course with a vivid IMAGINATION :) bye now... take care, paris

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