Shine Poem by Salman Sayeed

Shine

Rating: 5.0


Rudeness ego greed
Let go it all and do a good deed

Give up everything bad
If you cant your future will become sad

Practice today and start straight a way
Soon you will see the result of your action

If you ever fall don't worry
Just get up and chase your goal

After a while you will learn the basics
And you will shine through out

Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: future
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 10 April 2016

Practice today and start straight a way - I liked this line. Practice makes perfect - I also liked this kind of saying. Keep on writing.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 31 March 2016

Very inspiring poem you indeed have great ideas Salman. Keep reading and keepn writing and sharing.

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Keep fighting till you achieve the goal

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Salman Sayeed 30 March 2016

I will achieve not immediately. But definitely Thank you so much mam

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Salman Sayeed 30 March 2016

I will achieve not immediately. But definitely

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