Perfect World Poem by Margaret Alice

Perfect World

Rating: 5.0


If I could wish
for a perfect world
how should it be
a world where
we only do
what we like
or where we are
able to learn
to enjoy doing
what we have
to do?
A world where
others
like what
we do
or where
we do only
what others
want us to?
Where is the
balance
in all of
that?
Freedom
is such an
unfathomable
thing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Taylor 11 May 2007

Well I'm free to write whatever I want, to please you or tease you, I can comment with anything I like, and you can tell me to 'get on my bike', But want I can't say is 'you dont have the right', to express all your thoughts, whether they be wrong or they be right.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 May 2007

Amen to that Margaret...10

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Pretoria - South Africa
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