I Wanted To Tell Her Poem by Pallang Mofokeng

I Wanted To Tell Her

Rating: 4.5


I wanted to tell her
But my words were stuck here and
There
Coz.Coz.
I was afraid
Afraid She never felt the same.


During those days
Days of Laughter, Joy, and Happiness
Where we'd be sharing the same sit,
Drinking from, from
From the same glass
When I could see the Stars
Right through
Trough those beautiful eyes


Those Moments I could Pause
Wanting to talk
In those long walks
But my throat filled with chokes
4 the words inside
Were Chocked

Staring right at her face I fell
I fell in the deep pit
A deep pit of Love
I fell and did hurt
Because a fear to tell I had.

I wanted to tell her, but I was blind
I was blind to see, see, to see the love
The love I longed for in life

I wanted to tell her how I felt
Pity I couldn't tell
For Me and Her had turned to be
friends
But that's not where I wanted it to
end...

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life,sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Unspoken words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 December 2015

I guess one has to tread with caution in trying to transform a platonic relationship into romantic one, since one runs the risk of distress that comes with rejection. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Pallang. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

Love is not a decision; it either hit you or, leave you. So, try to tell her that you really love her. Nice work.

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Earnest Gatuma 15 December 2015

splendid.Very great indeed.I love it!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 December 2015

deep pit of love, thanks, I like it.

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Pallang Mofokeng

Pallang Mofokeng

Sterkspruit Eastern Cape South Africa
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